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		<title>Comment on Manahune by ross bodle</title>
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		<dc:creator>ross bodle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jul 2011 03:02:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Greetings from New Zealand, yes I&#039;m very interested in all pygmy type early cultures. I also have a question for the reader if applicable; the Waitaha folk of Aotearoa (NZ) tell of an island called Waitangi Ki Roto, believed to be in the southern Polynesian Pacific?
See my book on Google called (Sea Gypsies Down Under) available on FB &amp; Google.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Greetings from New Zealand, yes I&#8217;m very interested in all pygmy type early cultures. I also have a question for the reader if applicable; the Waitaha folk of Aotearoa (NZ) tell of an island called Waitangi Ki Roto, believed to be in the southern Polynesian Pacific?<br />
See my book on Google called (Sea Gypsies Down Under) available on FB &amp; Google.com</p>
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		<title>Comment on Whangai (Adoption) by Lawrence Pook</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lawrence Pook</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 May 2011 00:45:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i was reading the comments,my koro with whom i was raised brouight up 13 of us as far as i know, he die dwhwn i was seven, and dint know much about who he was, i knew him as dad, i later learnt he was a tohunga, and a ratana minister until he gave up in the realisation he needed no church to believe in the creator. so im now trying to find out more about him. as far as research on whangai there wasnt much when i did my studies, but when i came to Awanuiarangi ki Whakatane, i found the most valubale sources where from the koroua and kuia who live in the area, and whakatane has heaps of maori&#039;s, i dont think many maori saw any reason to write about it as it was an everyday thing. its not until&quot;serious&quot; academic study&quot; initiated by government departments became interested in our &quot;strange and posibbly dangerous&quot; cultural practices! so its most likely your thesis(jesse) will be one of the few out there!, most maori who practice it still, just do it and wont tell official channels in fear that syfs mite get involved.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i was reading the comments,my koro with whom i was raised brouight up 13 of us as far as i know, he die dwhwn i was seven, and dint know much about who he was, i knew him as dad, i later learnt he was a tohunga, and a ratana minister until he gave up in the realisation he needed no church to believe in the creator. so im now trying to find out more about him. as far as research on whangai there wasnt much when i did my studies, but when i came to Awanuiarangi ki Whakatane, i found the most valubale sources where from the koroua and kuia who live in the area, and whakatane has heaps of maori&#8217;s, i dont think many maori saw any reason to write about it as it was an everyday thing. its not until&#8221;serious&#8221; academic study&#8221; initiated by government departments became interested in our &#8220;strange and posibbly dangerous&#8221; cultural practices! so its most likely your thesis(jesse) will be one of the few out there!, most maori who practice it still, just do it and wont tell official channels in fear that syfs mite get involved.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Language by sigs</title>
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		<dc:creator>sigs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Apr 2011 21:25:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, sorry for posting before reading on a bit. I just skipped right here to the language section. Great that you picked Maori as the language in the game! Polynesian languages are vast in number and under-represented in today&#039;s world.

I hope you&#039;ll get access to the necessary resources; I&#039;m sure that researchers at any university would be ready to help with this sort of inter-disciplinary project that is a bit out of the academic world.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, sorry for posting before reading on a bit. I just skipped right here to the language section. Great that you picked Maori as the language in the game! Polynesian languages are vast in number and under-represented in today&#8217;s world.</p>
<p>I hope you&#8217;ll get access to the necessary resources; I&#8217;m sure that researchers at any university would be ready to help with this sort of inter-disciplinary project that is a bit out of the academic world.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Basic Words by sigs</title>
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		<dc:creator>sigs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Apr 2011 21:18:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Words don&#039;t make a language. Sorry to say, but don&#039;t start with just a wordlist. Start with stories, rather; how did they come to use these words? Where, why and by whom were they first spoken?

Consider issues of translitteration. Use IPA right from the start. Please *pretty please* don&#039;t use English-style litteration, it&#039;s braindead and retarded, burdened by tradition that has nothing to do with your world. You must have noticed that when you attended school.

You know, where I come from, children in pre-school are told that in English-speaking countries, there are contests called &quot;spelling bees&quot; where children compete on who knows how to write words. Hard for a pre-schooler to understand; what a hilarious idea! How could someone *not* know how their own words are spelt? People generally learn perfect reading and writing in half a year. With six years of age, and I&#039;m talking about national averages.

Words are important, don&#039;t just fart them up. Shape matters, pronunciation matters; litteration matters. If the words are just any letter combinations, why not rip them from an existing language; say, Latin?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Words don&#8217;t make a language. Sorry to say, but don&#8217;t start with just a wordlist. Start with stories, rather; how did they come to use these words? Where, why and by whom were they first spoken?</p>
<p>Consider issues of translitteration. Use IPA right from the start. Please *pretty please* don&#8217;t use English-style litteration, it&#8217;s braindead and retarded, burdened by tradition that has nothing to do with your world. You must have noticed that when you attended school.</p>
<p>You know, where I come from, children in pre-school are told that in English-speaking countries, there are contests called &#8220;spelling bees&#8221; where children compete on who knows how to write words. Hard for a pre-schooler to understand; what a hilarious idea! How could someone *not* know how their own words are spelt? People generally learn perfect reading and writing in half a year. With six years of age, and I&#8217;m talking about national averages.</p>
<p>Words are important, don&#8217;t just fart them up. Shape matters, pronunciation matters; litteration matters. If the words are just any letter combinations, why not rip them from an existing language; say, Latin?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Language by sigs</title>
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		<dc:creator>sigs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Apr 2011 21:08:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi. I&#039;m a bit of a language geek, and my background is in mathematics, you could say the pedantic kind. What annoys me most in artificial languages is the uninnovativeness. As if you&#039;d play safe somehow by just taking features of natural languages and mashing them together. For that&#039;s how most artificial languages are made.

A good artificial language evolves and develops from a set of constraints, or selective pressures in evolutionary terms. Naturally by studying natural languages of sufficiently different and remote language groups (myself I have a fluency in languages from four groups, one of them being the indo-european ones), you can find features that define and distinguish a language from another. You also notice quickly how their different environments have influenced the form they&#039;ve taken over the course of their histories.

Now, if I&#039;d create a language, I&#039;d try to come up with something that &quot;no one has come up with before&quot;. Acknowledging it&#039;s but an illusion, aiming for anything less would make the whole labour seem just... not worth the while; why not just pick Tolkien&#039;s elfspeak? I hear it&#039;s tremendous! This is closely related to my first point of annoyance; why re-invent the wheel? Natural languages definitely never did if there was any chance of absorbing it from the neighbours (and that&#039;s why I mentioned language groups instead of single languages; knowing Italian and Spanish you only know one language really). Why try to do the same, just better? I very VERY seldom ends up being better.

And that takes me to my second irritation about synthetic languages: they&#039;re poorly made in general. Half-assed. Brainfarts. Refutable in three seconds, non-coherent, inplausible. Bad.

Please don&#039;t make a (new) bad language! Take a less bad instead that has been tried and tested.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi. I&#8217;m a bit of a language geek, and my background is in mathematics, you could say the pedantic kind. What annoys me most in artificial languages is the uninnovativeness. As if you&#8217;d play safe somehow by just taking features of natural languages and mashing them together. For that&#8217;s how most artificial languages are made.</p>
<p>A good artificial language evolves and develops from a set of constraints, or selective pressures in evolutionary terms. Naturally by studying natural languages of sufficiently different and remote language groups (myself I have a fluency in languages from four groups, one of them being the indo-european ones), you can find features that define and distinguish a language from another. You also notice quickly how their different environments have influenced the form they&#8217;ve taken over the course of their histories.</p>
<p>Now, if I&#8217;d create a language, I&#8217;d try to come up with something that &#8220;no one has come up with before&#8221;. Acknowledging it&#8217;s but an illusion, aiming for anything less would make the whole labour seem just&#8230; not worth the while; why not just pick Tolkien&#8217;s elfspeak? I hear it&#8217;s tremendous! This is closely related to my first point of annoyance; why re-invent the wheel? Natural languages definitely never did if there was any chance of absorbing it from the neighbours (and that&#8217;s why I mentioned language groups instead of single languages; knowing Italian and Spanish you only know one language really). Why try to do the same, just better? I very VERY seldom ends up being better.</p>
<p>And that takes me to my second irritation about synthetic languages: they&#8217;re poorly made in general. Half-assed. Brainfarts. Refutable in three seconds, non-coherent, inplausible. Bad.</p>
<p>Please don&#8217;t make a (new) bad language! Take a less bad instead that has been tried and tested.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Whangai (Adoption) by Chloe</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chloe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Apr 2011 05:02:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there
I am currently seeking information about whangai. i am pregnant with a baby girl and would like to know more.. Many of my family want to take her. and not all are maori and understand my wishes.. which way do i go?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there<br />
I am currently seeking information about whangai. i am pregnant with a baby girl and would like to know more.. Many of my family want to take her. and not all are maori and understand my wishes.. which way do i go?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Whangai (Adoption) by Pete</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pete</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Mar 2011 19:01:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for writing Pare, it warms my heart that you are so very blessed 8)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for writing Pare, it warms my heart that you are so very blessed 8)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Whangai (Adoption) by Pare</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Mar 2011 21:15:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nga mihi ki a koe.
Im a whangai. To be honest it was something I took for granted as a child. Im the oldest grandchild of my family. The first in my whakapapa line, and lived with Nanny and Koro on and off my whole life. I was also sent to my mothers older sister for various reasons, but ALL positive. There was never any negative connotations attached to each move. While my connection to my Nan (Koro passed away) is much stronger than the one i share with my parents, I now appreciate the gift I was given by living with Nan and Koro. This article was wonderful to read. You say the things that I only thought of in the quiet spaces of my mind.
Tena Koe
Pare</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nga mihi ki a koe.<br />
Im a whangai. To be honest it was something I took for granted as a child. Im the oldest grandchild of my family. The first in my whakapapa line, and lived with Nanny and Koro on and off my whole life. I was also sent to my mothers older sister for various reasons, but ALL positive. There was never any negative connotations attached to each move. While my connection to my Nan (Koro passed away) is much stronger than the one i share with my parents, I now appreciate the gift I was given by living with Nan and Koro. This article was wonderful to read. You say the things that I only thought of in the quiet spaces of my mind.<br />
Tena Koe<br />
Pare</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Courage to be Immoral by Chigozie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chigozie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jan 2011 16:39:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the first problem is the title for this entry: &quot;The Courage to be Immoral&quot;.

I want to write a story [I haven&#039;t taken a creative writing class, but the idea is there and I&#039;ve written a few things down pertaining to the story I want to write]that involves nudity, but nudity that is commonplace in the society that the protagonist grew up in.  Now I&#039;m running into the same problem as you regarding if I&#039;m being immoral especially since my protagonist is also female.  

Where our issues aren&#039;t similar is that I&#039;m trying to cultivate a culture from scratch and you are using historical references.  At least that&#039;s the impression I get.  So I believe that since you&#039;re taking it from a historical point-of-view you should be able to do what you want in the context of what&#039;s actually documented.  Because it&#039;s documented you will have foundation and backbone to shore up the reasons for why your protagonist is depicted the way she is.  Anyone who decides to incite animosity towards your work can be met with documentation citing how you know things were in that time.

I know that many do not want to be the forerunner in anything like this that almost screams to the viewer that they change the way they look at things, but it will fall to someone and it&#039;s much better that you do it as I think you aren&#039;t making a political statement as I might.  

Frankly I&#039;m tired of people shying away from things because of supposed morality when the subject of nudity shouldn&#039;t come down to morality but to context of how the nudity is used.  I don&#039;t know if it was said here, but in the US we live in a sexually repressed society where sex is also a lucrative business venture.  We slap &quot;Showgirls&quot; with an NC-17 rating and limited screens while giving &quot;Eyes Wide Shut&quot; an R rating with a nationwide release for I forget how many months that movie was in theaters.  We admonish depictions of nudity in games, but have no issue with having characters behead individuals, and/or slaughter civilians at our leisure.  It doesn&#039;t make sense.

Now that I&#039;m thinking about it because of your documentation you may actually get a pass much like Kubrik did.  I, on the other hand, will still find it difficult much like whoever directed Showgirls (though I intend for my story to have considerably more depth).

In short, (as I said earlier) do what you want and let the documentation/research cover you and I look forward to seeing what you produce.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the first problem is the title for this entry: &#8220;The Courage to be Immoral&#8221;.</p>
<p>I want to write a story [I haven't taken a creative writing class, but the idea is there and I've written a few things down pertaining to the story I want to write]that involves nudity, but nudity that is commonplace in the society that the protagonist grew up in.  Now I&#8217;m running into the same problem as you regarding if I&#8217;m being immoral especially since my protagonist is also female.  </p>
<p>Where our issues aren&#8217;t similar is that I&#8217;m trying to cultivate a culture from scratch and you are using historical references.  At least that&#8217;s the impression I get.  So I believe that since you&#8217;re taking it from a historical point-of-view you should be able to do what you want in the context of what&#8217;s actually documented.  Because it&#8217;s documented you will have foundation and backbone to shore up the reasons for why your protagonist is depicted the way she is.  Anyone who decides to incite animosity towards your work can be met with documentation citing how you know things were in that time.</p>
<p>I know that many do not want to be the forerunner in anything like this that almost screams to the viewer that they change the way they look at things, but it will fall to someone and it&#8217;s much better that you do it as I think you aren&#8217;t making a political statement as I might.  </p>
<p>Frankly I&#8217;m tired of people shying away from things because of supposed morality when the subject of nudity shouldn&#8217;t come down to morality but to context of how the nudity is used.  I don&#8217;t know if it was said here, but in the US we live in a sexually repressed society where sex is also a lucrative business venture.  We slap &#8220;Showgirls&#8221; with an NC-17 rating and limited screens while giving &#8220;Eyes Wide Shut&#8221; an R rating with a nationwide release for I forget how many months that movie was in theaters.  We admonish depictions of nudity in games, but have no issue with having characters behead individuals, and/or slaughter civilians at our leisure.  It doesn&#8217;t make sense.</p>
<p>Now that I&#8217;m thinking about it because of your documentation you may actually get a pass much like Kubrik did.  I, on the other hand, will still find it difficult much like whoever directed Showgirls (though I intend for my story to have considerably more depth).</p>
<p>In short, (as I said earlier) do what you want and let the documentation/research cover you and I look forward to seeing what you produce.</p>
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		<title>Comment on More Storyline Updates by How to Make a Compelling Main Character &#124; Kōtiro</title>
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		<dc:creator>How to Make a Compelling Main Character &#124; Kōtiro</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Jan 2011 20:42:24 +0000</pubDate>
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