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Central Question Raised (Kōtiro’s Vision)

Scene Purpose:
-Resolving the problem or situation presented here (based on the Inciting Incident) would bring the story to an end.
-The Antagonist character is introduced.

has a vision: clouds are front of her eyes, swirling and moving—violent faces seem to form in them, snarling and snapping. As she draws nearer, the clouds begin to break, and the surface of the world becomes visible, with land and ocean present.

Comets fall from behind you like shooting stars, hitting the earth and splashing into the ocean. Land rumbles and shifts, still drawing nearer.

The shape of the land is changing—new mountains are forming right beneath you.

The contour of the land now forms a picture—just as a giant earthen face becomes visible and takes up the camera, the face’s eyes open wide, and blind Kō with white light.

The white light fades, to a double zoom side view of Kō lying on her back, and Aroha are present. They in a temporary hut, with people sitting outside, around their own small fires. It’s raining lightly.
Kōtiro has just witnessed first hand the sky father, Rangi, hurdling toward the earth mother, which is the ultimate goal of the antagonist Tawhiri. This is what will happen if Kō fails.

(Thanks to Richard for the idea to make this scene a vision!)


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