Inciting Incident (Full Eclipse)
Scene Purpose:
-An event or decision that sets the plot in motion, and tells the audience what the story will be about.
Up until now, the time has early morning, and this would be right around dawn. However, I want this scene to have a full solar eclipse, which has to happen around 4pm, because that’s actually when the real solar eclipse happened: read more.
So right now this scene takes place both right around dawn and at 4pm… I’ll fix it later.
The sun is covered by a shadow–a full solar eclipse. At the moment it’s full covered, a piercing roar cuts through the ambient flute, triggering an earthquake. The mountain top explodes into the sky, belching smoke and boulders. The smoke curls outward, revealing a magma creature: a giant bat made of lava, perched on the mountain like a vulture.
The ocean nearby boils as smoldering boulders splash into it, and from the depths leaps a water beast, like an octopus with arms. The water creature tackles the lava creature, and they both roll down the side of the mountain.
Both people, having been knocked down by the explosion, look in horror as the creatures roll over their village. A shot of Kō sitting sort of in Mō’s lap, Mō is holding her shoulder, and Kō is clasping her twist in one hand, and reaching out with the other, screaming “Aroha!”
