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Subplot Reflection & Doubt

Scene Purpose:
Main Character holds back from the relationship with the Partner character

Ingo, Resolve: Steadfast. Ingo feels that Love is not enough, it has to be considered in context. He never changes his opinion in the story.

Ko meets Ingo again. She excited to see him, but cuts off her own excitement. Maybe he tries to hug her, and she becomes “all business” after that.

This scene happens too soon after Ingo “dies.” I need to move it somehow.


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